DOnt be too harsh,it sounds right to me... This is my first tab, tell me what you think, please, go easy on me haha. E----------------------------0-0-2-2-| B----------------------------2-2-3-3-| G----------------------------2-2-4-4-| D---------2------------------2-2-4-4-| A--------4-4-2--2*-4-2-------0-0-2-2-| E-0h2-5--------4------5-4-5--X-X-X-X-| * Pause for the bass.